From xxxxxxxx (#000000) [reply] [quoted]
Date: Wednesday, October 18, 2006, 05:22PM
Your recruitment campaign seems to be working; I started playing KoL just today, and two of your clansmen have invited me to join. I looked up your clan and its website, notably the forum thread about recruiting new members.
Your member runzwifscissorz's message was very polite and explained to me just what I need to do should I want to join, and even apologized in advance if I wasn't interested. I must admit, that did get me interested in such a polite, helpful clan.
However, member A Dude sent me a two-line message with the same goal of getting me to join and specifically naming him to you as my recruiter. He used no capitalization whatsoever nor punctuation (other than the dot in your clan's name), which I find disappointing given the game's emphasis on literacy. Also, he sent me 10,000 meat, fully 10 times what I had saved from my first 120 turns. This, to me, triviallized a lot of the work I had done in the game so far.
Now, I didn't read the forum thread long enough to discover what incentives you are providing to successful recruitment efforts (as I wanted to get back to playing KoL), nor do I know if you provide your members with that polite message as a form letter, but A Dude's message pretty much cancelled out the enthusiasm for your clan that runzwifscissorz's generated.
So for now, I'm holding off on my decision to join your (or any) clan. Also, please take your 10,000 meat back to your clan stash.
Meat You gain 10,000 Meat.
This is exactly why you should learn to use the english language instead of your lil' kiddie MSN Messenger slang.
